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someone teach me how to write, please ?
yes .
please. this is getting out of hand . i'm so awful.
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Given 2012-02-13
dives and lazarus by ~forcopeland ( Suggested by `Amberlouie and Featured by $lightningmonkey )
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Mood: Joy ~Desolira Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This is something my dear friend told me,

Poetry isn't about how well you write it, it's about how from the heart it is... because when it comes down to it, poetry that isn't from the heart isn't poetry at all.

Even if others think it's no good, you'll see it as expression.

And with enough no good expressions, you'll have the one that stops everyone in their tracks.

The unification of the heart, mind, and soul, all put into a labyrinth of words. This is the essence of poetry.

And I practically end up with a free verse of a comment. ^^
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:iconforcopeland:
thank you so much. your comment means so much to me. i appreciate you taking your time to share that with me C:
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Mood: Joy ~Desolira Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
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:iconforcopeland:
aw, thank you C:
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you're good.
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:iconforcopeland:
thank you!
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~kurohanefuyu Feb 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I like this, but it could use some revision.

Did you really think about this when you were writing ? Or did you just place down the words that came to mind at the time ?

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"I'm CRAZY, not STUPID."
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i did what i thought was right, people like it, and i think that's all that matters.
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~kurohanefuyu Feb 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I think it's better to write what you want to write for yourself and not really for others; if people like what you wrote then that's just a really great bonus; However, That's just my opinion.

Have you ever tried to write whatever came to mind without thinking about what to write next? And then when you were finished thought about what should stay and what isn't needed? Kinda like writing with your heart and then fixing everything with a critical mind afterword?

If not then I really do recommend it.

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"I'm CRAZY, not STUPID."
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i did write this for myself, and for a very personal reason, and i did NOT write this just for others. i never said i did. i didn't write this for attention or for comments or anything of the sort. i wrote this because i just plain felt like it.

i believe how i approach my writing does not concern you, personally, and i'm sorry if that happens to be offensive. if you are trying to suggest something about my writing, please do so politely and formally. however that may be, i do not believe i asked for critique.
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